It is true that, in this contemporary era, crime is being escalated day by day in all over the world mostly in youngsters and it is a worrying trend. Furthermore, government should start some campaign, attention should be given by parents and so on.
To start with, there are numerous points on this. Firstly, wealthy families give high pocket money to their children and never check where they are spending their money that is why children fall or adapt bad habbit and addict to smoking, drinking, gambling e.t.c. Another reason could be, unemployment rate is being increased steadily. Moreover, teenagers do not have much job for doing and that is why they prefer to take some heinous steps like kidnapping, murder, robbery in banks and homes and so on.
Looking on the solutions, a numbers of camping should be started by government in which they provide better moral lessons to children in funny ways. In addition, government should also pass some draconian rule against creation of new companies and provide some relief in taxation so could more youngsters could start their own start-ups.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly crime is increasing we know very well and it is not good for our societies or for country as well yet, we must understand that parents also play a vital role in children life they should always support their children in everything and government should provide more jobs after that we could control on this thing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...money that is why children fall or adapt bad habbit and addict to smoking, drinki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95491803279 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55017836664 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.1633933479 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.125 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092774885997 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418388677991 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242504926318 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570316702583 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198453623887 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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