Hello Rose,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to invite you in one music concert.
I want to inform you that this concert is all about jazz music I know you love jazz music. People more prefer rock and pop music nowadays but for older gadraning people want souuroinding to me peace and clam so organiser has invited old generation to for this music gadering 30 % youngester are also invited so we can join.
This concert was scheduled on upcoming weakend on Saturday night. We will have full night to enjoy this music.It was arranged bin the down town of the city where we can easly get transport to travel anytime it's not to much far from my place, if you want you can stay at my place on Sunday
I will wait for your responce to join me on concert.
Your trualty
Rashmi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... want you can stay at my place on Sunday I will wait for your responce to join me...
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... me on concert. Your trualty Rashmi .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 659.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42281879195 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17722722909 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691275167785 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4829461693 44.8134815571 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311960775242 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163399541645 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102718357526 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204565687749 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870974412287 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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