You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you. Write a letter to invite your friend to the concert you are planning to go to.
In your letter say:
what the content of the music concert is
where and when is the music concert
why do you think your friend should go to this concert
Dear Kevin,
Hope you are well and this letter find you perfect. I know that it has been a long time since we had meet last time , I am so sorry for this.
I tell you what. I am writing to ask whether you can come with me for Metallica Live Concert on the next weekend in Paris.
In fact , I have expected to go with my elder brother but he will not attend due to his hectic schedule for business reasons. You know that as he works in a global company , he will be send to the United Kingdom as a member of a team to sign some business project and in order to boost market productivity of his firm.
If you ok , we are going to fly on Friday by 11:00Pm airplane to France by using France Airlines and we will stay just one night in three star hotel.
Don’t worry about prices of flight and accommodation as I booked all of them in advance last month. It will not much cost.
If you want to accompany with me please let me know before on Saturday Kevin.
I look forward to hearing positive response from you in the near future.
All the best my friend.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-07-02 | Rashmi pandey | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a long time since we had meet last time , I am so sorry for this. I tell you wha...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...am so sorry for this. I tell you what. I am writing to ask whether you can come ...
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Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n the next weekend in Paris. In fact , I have expected to go with my elder bro...
^^
Line 6, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...now that as he works in a global company , he will be send to the United Kingdom a...
^^
Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t productivity of his firm. If you ok , we are going to fly on Friday by 11:00P...
^^
Line 8, column 144, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hotel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hotels'.
Suggestion: hotels
... will stay just one night in three star hotel. Don't worry about prices of fli...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ast month. It will not much cost. If you want to accompany with me please le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20289855072 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17681599721 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8729353935 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188435635109 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716707928118 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630004382959 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785419319727 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501623654655 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.