study food and its contents and how to prepare healthy diet is a big issue nowadays because we see that people suffering many diseases like malnutrition and obesity which mainly caused by unbalanced food, mostly youth are now focusing their appearance and want to look like young. however, we understand that eating and knowing how to cook your own meal is a vital part of our modern world.
learning subjects like biology, chemistry and so on, this the problem where part of society see its importance and their children should study I thought that parents and wives should cook and prepare a meal for youngs and teenagers must take all their time of calculating maths and physics. because world becoming digital and technology will enhance every day so their children must part of that digital universal,
in my idea student must learn how to prepare their meal in school time because it an essential part of our future and long life with healthy to be in the diet, for example, I have a teacher whose age is 72 years but he looks like 40 years you can't believe him unless he tells you his age after I ask him the secret of age, the sir tell me that he eat balance food contain mainly proteins and mineral and small of carbohydrate so we have to prepare our own meal.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Study
study food and its contents and how to prepar...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...appearance and want to look like young. however, we understand that eating and knowing ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Learning
...is a vital part of our modern world. learning subjects like biology, chemistry and so...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... time of calculating maths and physics. because world becoming digital and technology w...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...72 years but he looks like 40 years you cant believe him unless he tells you his age...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58951965066 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3033434004 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.338874024 49.4020404114 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.75 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.25 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16572156923 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989965002536 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433794743376 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107870317255 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131341113524 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 13.0946893788 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Study
study food and its contents and how to prepar...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...appearance and want to look like young. however, we understand that eating and knowing ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Learning
...is a vital part of our modern world. learning subjects like biology, chemistry and so...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... time of calculating maths and physics. because world becoming digital and technology w...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...72 years but he looks like 40 years you cant believe him unless he tells you his age...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58951965066 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3033434004 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.338874024 49.4020404114 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.75 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.25 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16572156923 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989965002536 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433794743376 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107870317255 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131341113524 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 13.0946893788 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.