The bar graph show the total manufacturing production in percentages Aisa, Europe and the rest of the world.
The column chart depicts the proportion regarding whole producing production in Asia, Europe and rest of the globe between 1840 and 2000.
Overall, it can be observed that the production of rest of the world was experiencing steady surge from 1840 to 1960, except in 2000; however, Europe had the topmost contribution among all given continents with having a lot of fluctuations throughout given time period.
To begin with, while the proportion of producing products of Asia experienced a downfall of 20% in 1880 from its beginning, Europe had meanwhile grown more splendid in terms of percentages at 5% which was higher than its contribution in 1840. Besides this, from 1840 to 1960 there was a straightforward increment of production for rest of the globe, which was almost at 35% in 1960, after then in 40 years, it had been declined by a tiny amount of percentage at around 2%.
In addition, although Europe remained the highest contribution from 1840 to 1960, Asia was a continent which had the highest growth of percentages, which likes (she saw) shape as it was varied throughout the end of year 2000. In the contribution of Asia was 15% lower than that of Europe, whilst the percentage of Asia and Europe manufacturing products in 1840 and 1920 were same at 50%. Nevertheless, the difference of nearly 18% had been marked in the year of 2000 in the comparison of contribution of Asia and Europe.
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| 2021-07-03 | Shivam patel | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89166666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89059778516 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7808416389 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.714285714 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2857142857 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157695835878 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865124296554 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519083258864 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111966968328 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172983993461 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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