The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It has been predicted that the well-being of people could be ruined exceedingly in accordance of its current status. Certainly, what I reckon is that owing to dreadful reasons, people's health system might be in danger.
To engender with, having a range of junk food options are firstly caused health and invite serious issues, be it obesity or skin hazards. Undeniably, people now have started to relying on it since fast food has a splendid test l, which neither satisfies their inner body, nor willingness. Because of having tried one fast food, there could be a probability for testing another one. Hence, it will destroy health and consequently individuals will have reeled with cardiovascular griefs. For instance, foods that are made by sugar tend to cause diabetes and high blood pressure due to excessive amount of sugar
Moreover, if denizens attention on maintaining the health cannot be drawn to serious problems, there will be a plunge of health level. To elaborate it, a strict diet plan should be followed although it is challenging. By practicing this, the probability of awful health problems will be a zero. For example, if a person takes 600 to 700 steps daily and eat less on the night and high in the morning, the risk of loosing immunity power can be lost.
In conclusion, since there is devoid of control on eating options as well as a deception with diets, stranded of people health experiences fluctuations. Surprisingly, it remains the same, masses should up to deal with hazardous health threats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00784313725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76221553811 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639215686275 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8935209296 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206638362324 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797450890271 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037758933131 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129593089075 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275519629025 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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