The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that human general health might be lowered in the next decades. This essay completely disagrees with that statement.
On the one hand, there have been various breakthrough innovations in today's modern medicine expectedly to increase life expectancy of human beings further in the future. Advanced treatments and preventive methods are increasingly discovered by medical professionals to make severe diseases no longer untreatable or unpreventable, which in turn has resulted in a higher rate of survivors from even the most severe health conditions. For example, vaccination was among the best inventions in medical field so far, it can help to prevent lots of deadly diseases which used to be big concerns among the society.
On the other hand, with the help of social media promoting the importance of maintaining a good health, people are more aware of their health conditions->THEIR WELL-BEING. As a result, they tend to do more exercises to keep their body fit, possibly leading to a better life quality and a better health condition. More people might be more motivated to manage their time effectively to go to the gyms and maintain their physics not to get obese caused by sitting and working for a long time lacking physical activities. For instance, YouTube is showing constantly contents related to mental health maintaining methods like yoga, which can influence users to take care of their health more attentively.
In conclusion, it is expected that human beings' health conditions might be improved significantly thanks to the rapid developing of the modern medical field and social awareness among our society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...n conclusion, it is expected that human beings health conditions might be improved sig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26717557252 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94242877051 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8294042854 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13917518942 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652384759933 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429798265489 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963925038368 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543605685676 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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