Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue
to explore the universe in which we live.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
According to many, exploring the space unnecessary when it comes utilising resources, however from the perspective of other illustrates that probing about the universe should be continued. This essay not only discusses both the notions, but also elaborate on why it is not important to explore space.
To engender with, certainly with intentions to launch satellites or going on to other planets, there would be a huge requirement of resources needed. To elaborate it, ranging from oxygen tanker to space suits costs a multitude amount of money. Unfortunately, anyone cannot stand with a strong guarantee that the particular research will meet all requirements and get the victory at the end. Thus, controlling body should invest that amount of money to formulate more oxygen in their country for the sake of surging living rate.
Besides this, exploring the universe by reaching at several planets harm not only mankind, but also nation’s economy. In other words, in order to reach very far in the universe, risk of death can be inclined and if it paves the way of the death of scientist, eventually there will be lost of all invested money. For example, Kalpana Chawla, an Indian space explorer died owing to insufficient oxygen when she was probing the universe after hundreds of previous successful attempts.
On the flip side, it would be essential to make records to seek out something new useful thing in the space, like extraterrestrial life of other forms and species. Consequently, this is helpful for the denizens of earth because newly found thing may be capable to fulfilling their needs. For instance, recently, NASA has revealed unique mineral from mars that would assist to mitigate the issue of petroleum, because that thing is made of 99% petroleum and 1% other minerals. Ultimately, the necessities of fuels and other things can be fulfilled, since there is a splendid availability of all resources to explore space.
In conclusion, despite acquiring useful minerals by other life forms from other planets, it is totally dreadful to attempting to reach out in the universe as it leads to the death of researchers as well as devoid of oxygen in the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...continued. This essay not only discusses both the notions, but also elaborate on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09470752089 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78230455622 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57938718663 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8009677113 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194808767554 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693450672913 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047660519976 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109199481274 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480550057877 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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