The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.
The information regarding the distinct native nations of the people and where they are living in Australia is depicted by the rendered combination of pie and tabular chart.
In the overall perspective, it is ostensible that the maximum people in Australia is living in urban areas , where Chinese are more. Noticeably, the proportion of Australia born is higher than others in total population of Australia.
To begin with, in total populace, three-quarter Australia inborn are recorded which is considerably greatest than other categories. In this population, 83% living in cities and 17% in countryside areas. However, other countries are comprised of 14%, which is exact double of figure of residents from the UK. A very large proportion of the UK based is Urban, while 11% is rural in Australia.
Probing further, there is a difference of 6%, in the percentage of New Zealand and Netherland connected people, now staying in Australia. Interestingly, the data of both the countries is approximately similar for population distribution in two areas. It is around 90% and 10% for metropolitan and suburbs respectively. Chinese made up a tiny portion, in which data accounted for developed one is 99%. Surprisingly, a minor part of china inherent prefers to live in villages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28292682927 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15486553568 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60487804878 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0470073705 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2746968898 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840660978647 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874848942506 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17691123708 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094825854779 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.