Surveys show that in many countries, people are living longer but increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?
In contemporary society, owing to advanced medical services, human longevity is prolonged. Accordingly, the number of senior citizens is predicted to surpass that of the young. To the best of my knowledge, there are many chronic effects on individuals and modern society for the following reasons.
Firstly, it is note-worthy that continued employment of older workers after reaching retirement is a strategic approach to young labor shortage. Nowadays, many sociological studies have shown that although it is invisible, with the trend of late parenthood, young labor crisis has become alarmingly serious in countries with low fertility rates. Therefore, it will be a grave mistake to overlook the fact that the expansion of aged population is a positive development to sustainability of macro-economic performance. For example, many countries are facing the shrinking workforce, so compulsory retirement has been abolished to expand working ages. This example is the illustration of the fact that older people can directly solve the lack of labor and create surpluses to society.
Secondly, the counter-argument raised by objectors to this is that the growing life expectancy is not accompanied by the increased quality of life for the elderly like chronic diseases or disability. This argument could be true to some extent; however, it is incomplete. What they fail to take into account to this is that local authorities and governments are responsible for taking care of elders, because they did pay taxes during working lives. For instance, statistics have proven that 30% of population over 60 may become demented before they die, and this proportion is constantly growing. In other words, under the facade of prolonged longevity, the old may fall victim to more health problems.
According to the above analysis, we can conclude that longer living affects both individuals and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43389830508 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0405097926 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637288135593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.992856505 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235354968718 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626473592221 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790825438229 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130353559334 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379552565695 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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