In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building Do you agree or disagree

In this modern era,various coutries have prohibited the smokers to smoke in the public places while if they wish to do so then they have to leave that place and must go to any of the other place.To a great extent i agree with this notion

To commence with the benefits, individuals around them will not feel conjusted and will not face health problems because of the injurious air that they release out.In other words when the smokers will smoke in the public no doubt there will be people of all the ages while this may cause breathing problems mostly among the elders and the young ones.for instance a survey was conducted by health department regarding the reason of increasing breathing problems and it was found that the number of cases arise from the individuals who smoke in public. Hence,this situation will increase if the use is not prohibited.

Further strengthening the views, this act will reduce the number of smokers.to elaborate,when the people around them will go away from the smokers they will feel a sense of unloved by the individuals while which will force them to a much extent to get rid from this bad habit of smoking .moreover,this is beneficial for them as they will live a healthy life.

In conclusion,this act of government is praise worthy as it will save the lives of many people and they can live healthy and happy life ahead.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74789915966 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60269615168 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 282.844480236 49.4020404114 573% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.5 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.5 20.7667163134 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.5 7.06120827912 446% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152374986577 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728257915826 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782169535227 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104325046152 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821145579632 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.9 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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