In many countries, it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
It is important to consider how public smoking is affecting the lives of the general public. Owing to this, most of the countries have already banned this practice and, allows smokers to smoke outside the workplace and in defined smoking zones. I completely agree with this notion as public smoking not only affects the health of people but also leaves an adverse impact on children.
The first and foremost reason to support my view is that the smoke in the air can have an egregious impact on the health of people. This is because the fumes produced from the cigarettes contain harmful gases which can cause various fatal diseases such as lung infection, breathing disorder, and cancer. For instance, according to a medical report by the Indian Institute of Medical Science, the death rate of the people affected from the lung cancer which is caused by the inhaling of smoking gas has steeped to 40% in the last five years. Therefore, if smokers will be allowed to smoke only in the confined areas, then there will be fewer chances of direct consumption of infected air by the people.
Secondly, my opinion is further bolstered by the factor that public smoking can also indulge the children in this bad habit. The reason for this is children are quite vulnerable and impressionable, they are usually not aware of the unethical means, as a consequence, they follow the actions of adults. For example, a psychological study states that 80% of the children are likely to perform the activities of elders whom they see in their day to day life. Henceforth, if public smoking will be prohibited, then juveniles will definitely be prevented from its harmful impact.
In conclusion, although many nations have declared public smoking as illegal and defined rules for smokers, in my opinion, this practice should be followed by all the countries considering its adversity on public health and wrong impression on the young ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...c smoking is affecting the lives of the general public. Owing to this, most of the countries h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99382716049 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5899659681 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7191760157 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224711569606 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888992858073 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676518831981 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151359743734 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716604758915 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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