One of your friends recently had a birthday party, but you missed it and forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
apologise for missing the birthday celebrations
explain why you missed it and why you did not tell your friend
say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.
Dear Joban,
I hope this letter finds you in best of your health. I'm writing to apologize you for not attending your birthday party last Sunday.
Let me explain my situation, as you already know I have recently switched my job and this new work environment is entirely different and more demanding as compared to the previous one. I was all prepared for coming to the celebrations, however, on a Sunday morning, I got an urgent call from my team lead that the code developed by me was not working in the production. Owing to this issue, the banking transactions were blocked, therefore, I hurriedly rush to office in order to fix it.
Moreover, in the hurriedness I completely forgot to inform you, I'm extremely sorry for that. Although I know that you might be upset, to showcase my gesture of apology, I owe you a dinner party at your favourite restaurant the 'Taj' this Friday. Also, I am attaching a Vero Moda online shopping coupon as a birthday present, shop according to your choice.
I hope to see you soon.
Yours loving,
Prabh
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| 2020-01-19 | sohailahmad | 82 | view |
| 2019-10-17 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 59 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...etter finds you in best of your health. Im writing to apologize you for not attend...
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Line 13, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ness I completely forgot to inform you, Im extremely sorry for that. Although I kn...
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Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...see you soon. Yours loving, Prabh
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77717391304 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71693474425 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3065095626 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288883989172 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124308883689 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878069315976 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186959245219 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127285515382 0.0580467560999 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.