In many countries, new houses are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside.
Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about them?
The massive increase in the population has lead to a shortage of dwelling places in urban areas, however, vacant spaces for the construction of homes are only available in the outskirts of cities. Some people assert that the protection of the countryside from urban utilization is quite essential. I strongly support the view and in my opinion, the countryside is the most important place for any civilization because it is where the majority of food grow to feed people in the cities and through which environmental pollution is balanced.
Primarily, developing suburbs in agricultural areas might have egregious consequences for the cities. In other words, the construction of new buildings or industries obligates the farmers to move to other places or to leave agricultural practices. Consequently, this can affect the export of wheat and rice to cities, as a result, price become sky-rocketing of these food products. For example, the agricultural association of Punjab stated that 40% downfall in agriculture export has been observed in the last ten years which has increased the prices of paddy to 10%, following the growth of urbanization.
Secondly, the major areas in the countryside are the sources of a clean and healthy environment as these areas are mostly covered with trees and plants. Furthermore, deforestation done to build new places can further exaggerate environmental pollution. To exemplify, the construction of Vatika apartments in the outskirts of Haryana has caused the destruction of 30% of the entire vegetation of the area. Nevertheless, protecting rural sites is quintessential for a balanced ecosystem.
In conclusion, it can be stated that the preservation of the countryside is vital for the healthy survival of human beings and to protect the environment. Therefore, using this space for building new living spaces might create consequences for nature and to individual. In the near future, to alleviate the problem of space for building homes, some scientific schemes need to be followed, instead of consuming the productive countryside lands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41411042945 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21141033037 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555214723926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5504444399 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.071428571 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231218758713 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074885326141 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556575965278 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133864643517 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059919186747 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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