Many people try to look younger than their age.
What are the reasons people do this?
Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?
In these modern times, physical appearance plays a vital role in different fields of work. This is the reason why many people nowadays indulge themselves in regular workouts to hide their original age. Although this trend sometimes involves unethical means such as facial surgeries, in my opinion, it is a positive phenomenon as it makes people fit and healthy.
To begin with, the most crucial reason for the people trying to present themselves younger than their age is the demand of profession. This is because, there are a plethora of employment sectors such as airline attendants, receptionists and actors, which require young and energetic employees, as success in these areas is based on physical fitness. For instance, according to a recent study by the Hindu, 80% of the television stars undergo age therapies in order to grab some significant roles in movies and commercials. Therefore, professional success urges people to look more young and enthusiastic.
Admittedly, there are some negative aspects associated with this trend. In order to look attractive, some people opt for cosmetic treatments, which can have an adverse impact on their health. The reason for this is these treatments involve the usage of harmful chemicals which can cause various skin issues such as allergies and cancer. To exemplify, the great singer Michale Jackson, underwent approximately 50 surgeries, so that he could look young, however, this caused him fatal end.
Nevertheless, despite the aforementioned drawback, in my perspective, it is a positive thing as it provides people with a healthy and energetic life. Owing to the fact that in order to look young people not only perform regular exercise, yoga and walk but also consume a nutritious diet. Consequently, this energize their stamina and rejuvenate their body to work more actively. For example, a survey by America's popular magazine 'People' states that Hollywood actors above the age of 60 perform in an average of four movies each year, only because of their fit body.
In conclusion, it can be stated that various professionals try to look young to meet the requirements of their job. Though some choose inappropriate methods to achieve this, in my view, physical fitness and activeness of people make this a good phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26358695652 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86597581009 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2542930807 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.941176471 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326010870397 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101190048166 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647489359605 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184203941798 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198578309162 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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