In this contemporary epoch , children are a pillar of our developing nation . Certain folks holds the opinion that in order to shape their offspring physical punishment is highly mandatory , however some says that these kind of exercise ought to be banned . This essay intends to delve into both contradictory arguments before reaching my opinion .
commencing with , there are a myriad of parents who believe that physical punishment is a excellent form of punishment to make them obedient . Firstly , those young ones who do not listen and obey their elders , parents feels that hitting their children will be a immense to make them follows the rules and will ameliorate them to make a good human being . India , take as an example , majority of parents and schools institution obey this exercise to reshape children . Hence , smacking juvenile by parents for reforming their character is essential .
However , despite of the aforesaid argument , there are some mankind who thinks that hurting children by giving them physical punishment ought to be banned immediately for plethora of reasons . The most prominent one is that it makes juvenile arrogant and stubborn . If elders keep smacking their offspring on little things they done wrong then this made children to distance themselves from their parents as they do not feel loved by them. Inspite of this , since youngsters always feel deprived and low-esteem that this will stimulate them to commit a delinquency . consequently , violent punishment should be refrain by parents due to the aforementioned reasons .
To conclude , considering all these factors i can say that although teaching juvenile for being a good human being is pivotal , physical and violent punishment is not justifiable and should be made illegal .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31899641577 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81436022718 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8171805634 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249519044068 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886435854604 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808541803115 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165586800112 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359507219544 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.