Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today`s buyers are encountering advertisements by business entities which may have high impact on their lives. In my opinion, these impressive ads include has fake details and by certifying their quality consumers may avoid from these problems.
To start with, some advertisements include exaggeration of quality of goods which can be also achieved with the help of the advanced digital technologies and media. There is to say that advertisement rules of nearly in all states permits to maintain some unreal details about the production. As a good example, some pop-ups of Coca-cola inform that by drinking the one, the sense of energy can be felt even for a week.
Additionally, majority of these ads are often presented to the public by using variety wide-scope of mass media. In other words, TV, internet and radio which have significant impact on the public are daily demonstrating these advertisements. As provided by statistics commite of Uzbekistan 70 percent of the advertisements of local business organisations are presented on television in 2004. Howver, despite the growing impact of the advertisements on public, this disantanglements can be resolved by certifying the products by territorial product-quality-monitoring government organisations.
To conclude, In spite of having undeniable impact of today`s commercials on the people which is the result of exaggerating and extended mass media, these issues can be resolved by certification of process of production.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maintaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: maintaining
...t rules of nearly in all states permits to maintain some unreal details about the productio...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ily demonstrating these advertisements. As provided by statistics commite of Uzbek...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60352422907 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62575673455 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6568366516 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140721313704 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054485083795 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404481018473 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809897281683 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384060854179 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.