Governments around the world are often perplexed in complexities about addressing current concerns with primacy or to tackle expected concerns first. Unequivocally the prior should be taken care of first rather than the latter. It is a no brainer that immediate issues concern us the most and help build a good image of the government-anticipated problems might be solved with time, technological improvements, or development of new techniques.
If one goes by classifying the concerns the most current one's seem to be effecting the society the most. An emergency water shortage in an already water shortage facing area will be taken care of first by supplying water tankers or water trains to alleviate the problem of residents first rather building a large artificial lakes or pipelines to permanently solve the problem. Convincingly, supplying water tankers first is the most logical choice to anyone as without water in the short term the living in the area would become unviable for the residents.
Public opinion shapes out of activeness of government to resolve short-term issues swiftly. Governments that react actively to near around issue enjoy a better public image. Populace is often least concerned about the expected problems of the future and seemingly deny their existence, no matter how importantly they may impact them later, they seem to be completely involved in everyday lives and problems. Governments who fail to deal with immediate problems affecting the public the most gradually lose confidence of the public and get replaced in the next elections. Shinzo Abe was known for his long-sightedness as a political leader in Japan however since the nuclear spillover in Fukushima and government’s inability to handle it without disrupting public lives. Giving a backlash to his image, as a political leader and further he had to take early retirement to save face from defeat in next elections.
Another, important aspect to be kept in conscience is that with the advent of technology most pf the problems get resolved in the future, be it medical science where new methods and practices are being derived meteorically, technology making our lives easier, or be it environmental engineering to improve environment, improve land use or recover land. Fracking was initially termed to have very dire consequences for the environment and faced severe criticism and protests but ultimately it lead to lower gas prices and reduced dependence on foreign countries, additionally giving a boost to local economies. Electoral results with reelection of the government is evident of public support.
Governments gain more confidence by solving immediate problems first as they are the most concerning to the public in general. We can conveniently say that public opinion is shaped out of quick and swift addressing of arising issues. The anticipated problems sure need to be focused but are ultimately solved with technology and newer methods. The best approach on solving such anticipated problems is by solving part of it periodically in near time rather than giving complete focus to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s, or development of new techniques. If one goes by classifying the concerns th...
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Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alleviating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: alleviating
...supplying water tankers or water trains to alleviate the problem of residents first rather b...
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Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lake'?
Suggestion: lake
...irst rather building a large artificial lakes or pipelines to permanently solve the p...
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Line 8, column 493, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...riticism and protests but ultimately it lead to lower gas prices and reduced depende...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2628.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33062880325 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03379253683 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553752535497 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7367857545 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.315789474 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9473684211 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197274780608 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703425204268 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742037500411 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127534532926 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895413007058 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.