Claim: Researchers should not limit their investigations to only those areas in which they expect to discover something that has an immediate, practical application.
Reason: It is impossible to predict the outcome of a line of research with any certainty.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Research and innovation are the keys to develop a nation, and the world today is the best example of it. The prompt claims that scholars should not limit their experimentations to just those topics in which they hope to innovate something with an imminent and empirical application because the estimation of the results with certainty is impossible in research. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this statement for the reason mentioned in the prompt and another reason, however, I do concede that sometimes it is necessary to focus on research that has an immediate practical implementation.
First of all, researchers should not just concentrate on investigations that entail early pragmatic outcomes since before completing the entire works, they do not know what might happen. The main reason for researches is to find out the probable causes of a physical phenomenon, social event or to check the plausibility of a hypothesis, so if before finishing the works, researchers know what will occur, then there is no need for that research. For instance, the great scientist Albert Einstein worked several years to model the gravitational wave not knowing what he would find after the experiments. Then, when he created a model, it was so different than this expectation that he even expressed his doubts about the accuracy of the results, however, recently CERN, a physics research institute, discovered the gravitational wave and stated that it is almost similar what Einstein found and can be used to solve numerous astrological problems. Thus, scholars should work in a systematic way to find meaningful outcomes even if the work does not have immediate application as, without research, the results can not be predicted with certainty.
Secondly, scholars should not think about the immediate application because long term applicability could be more useful. Some researches require many years to complete, particularly theoretical research in physics or mathematics, and the time spent is commensurate with the significance of the outcome. For example, the physicist Nikolas Tesla who invented the AC power we use today worked his whole life in different projects that did not have any use at that time. But he was ahead of his time and thought about the future, consequently, he worked in wireless power transfer which was useless then but modern scientists exploited his theory, and now we can charge our mobile and computer without any wire connection. If he only considered projects that had immediate use, we would not have such wonderful wireless devices.
However, in some rare cases, scholars should focus highly on immediate problems targeting a probable outcome. Mankind faces unexpected events sometimes; such important times require different measurements to tackle them. For instance, the world is now besieged by the novel coronavirus, scientists do not know much about its molecular structure and genome. There is no medicine available that can cure the patients, so the only way to protect people is to prevent it from infecting which can be achieved by vaccination. As a result, researchers all over the world have been working relentlessly to invent vaccines, and already we have some efficient vaccines such as Moderna, Pfizer, Oxford, etc within only one year. These vaccines are saving millions of lives. If in this unprecedented situation, researchers did not think about the current threat, we would not have these life saving cures.
In conclusion, researchers should think about the future world while working rather than limiting their works to resolve only impending problems, however, in unusual situations, they need to devote their time to solve immediate threats.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...he created a model, it was so different than this expectation that he even expressed...
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Line 3, column 976, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic way" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...al problems. Thus, scholars should work in a systematic way to find meaningful outcomes even if the...
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Line 7, column 870, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this life' or 'these lives'?
Suggestion: this life; these lives
...t the current threat, we would not have these life saving cures. In conclusion, researc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3126.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 589.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30730050934 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89836068099 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524617996604 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 974.7 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.463042648 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.857142857 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0476190476 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31612056593 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855260771082 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873916592654 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185171836524 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10152973184 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 161.0 100.480337079 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.