The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing noodles in a factory in 8 steps.
First, flour is transferred to the factory by special trucks and is stored in some storage silos. Then a portion of the flour is mixed with water and oil in a mixer. In the third step, the dough that has been made in the mixer is changed to some sheets and is conveyed to the next step with the help of some rollers. While the dough is passing through the rollers its thickness is adjusted and in the fourth step, some strips are made from the dough sheets.
In the fifth step, the yield of the fourth step (i.e. the dough strips) is pushed through some discs to form the final shape of the noodles. In the sixth step, cooking oil is added to prevent the noodles stick together and they will be dried in a warmer.
In step seven, the noodles are sorted in some cups and suitable vegetables and spices are added based on the order. Finally, in the eighth step, the containers are labeled and sealed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r and they will be dried in a warmer. In step seven, the noodles are sorted in s...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the containers are labeled and sealed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39344262295 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18564207134 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3900965935 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0430694894568 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260831986743 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508896934946 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533836486999 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064766037458 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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