Nowadays, education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offsprings to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, people have a tendency to allow their children to receive education in a foreign countries. Meanwhile, many people still hold opposition to this trend. While I agree that there are some drawbacks, I believe studying abroad can bring various values to the students.
On the one hand, the idea of overseas education may be problematic to some extent. First, students who go abroad for study may have to undergo cultural shock because they are exposed to an entirely new and strange atmosphere. As a result, it may take them a long time to adapt to their new life. Another hindrance is the expenses for abroad studying because the education fee in foreign countries, especially in developed ones such as the USA and England, are often prohibitive. There are other expenses including accommodation, flights, daily life needs and unusual services such as healthcare, which may be too much to afford for many families.
On the other hand, students who attend schools abroad will gain substantial benefits for themselves. First, they stand a chance to get access to high-quality facilities and technology and meet with top-class professors, which allows them to be stretched to their full potential. This helps improve their specialized knowledge and skills so they are likely to get better job opportunities and thus, achieving higher earning levels in the future. Furthermore, when studying overseas, especially in a multi-cultural country such as the USA, students are exposed to people from various cultural backgrounds. Thanks to this, they can broaden their knowledge about different cultures all over the world and gain more real life experience. At the same time, their communication skills and foreign language ability can also be bettered. All of these things contribute to these students being a more dynamic and versatile people.
To conclude, while there are still some demerits to studying overseas regarding cultural shock and high costs, I believe that the chances of enriching their academic and cultural knowledge makes it attractive and rewarding.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, still, thus, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29393939394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82037874616 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3360714553 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167574992207 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558033295439 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283978327178 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105836422158 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398802918436 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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