In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Thanks to the development of technologies such as computers, the Internet and smartphones, the majority of people are beginning to work from home rather than go to their workplace like in the past. In my opinion, it brings both negative and positive aspects of this new development.
To start with, the advantages of working from home via computers or smartphones help staff save time and money. Since they do not have to go to work, which saves moving from home to work. Moreover, needing to travel to go to their workplace helps them reduce transportation fees so that they can save money. What is more, working from home is very convenient and comfortable, they can arrange their work time and can work anywhere they want. For instance, they can choose the time they work and can spend time on supporting their family.
Besides the benefits of working at home it also brings some disadvantages for employees that they cannot solve important problems immediately. They have to work online through computers or smartphones, hence, they cannot face to face meetings to exchange the issues. All of these issues usually have to send an email and must wait for the manager to consider giving a solution so as to solve it, which takes much time. Working in a group is similar as well, they cannot support each other. Furthermore, working at home meets some problems such as distraction by space and some factors around.
In conclusion, the development of technologies and the Internet help people to work online through computers or smartphones, which is very convenient. However, it has some drawbacks of solving essential problems as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...es. All of these issues usually have to send an email and must wait for the manager to consid...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e manager to consider giving a solution so as to solve it, which takes much time. Workin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74768121625 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5129323958 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302271232946 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110032738133 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904728371903 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179736405499 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566207654535 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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