It is an irrefutable claim that more and more people are suffering from various ailments across the world.According to some people, the government should spend a huge amount of capital on the treatment and research of diseases so it’s preferable to fund preventive measures. In my opinion, I disagree that medical treatment and researches are exorbitant so preventive measures should be adopted. This essay will justify it by providing few reasons in subsequent paragraphs.
A good reason to invest a large amount of money in discoveries of new medicines and medical equipment is that it would help in saving valuable human lives.
There are numerous diseases like cancer, genetic disorder, plastic surgery, congenital anomalies which require new medical technologies to be developed. At present 65% of people are dying from several diseases because of a lack of better medicines and equipment. This results in an increase in the death rate and is very alarming, which can be avoided by investing money in better medical treatments and researches.
Another point to consider is that providing sufficient funds on adequate health education and teaching preventive measures means resolving many communicable diseases such as AIDS, cholera, typhoid, and dengue. For example, World Health Organisation conducted a campaign called “Harmful effects of Smoking”, which runs globally and it has helped in reducing the cases of tuberculosis by 30%. This has resulted in a huge decrease in the number of tuberculosis cases in many poor African nations.
Finally, studying and treating diseases is a must for increasing human life expectancy to an average of 85 to 90 years. This will result in humans working another 10 years which can contribute to the economy. In other words, the citizens of the country can benefit in terms of life expectancy as a whole.
In conclusion, funding in medical research and treatment by the government is a must for saving lives, generating awareness, and increasing human life expectancy.
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 78
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 78
- Crimes and other kinds of information on TV and newspapers have bad consequences This kind of information should be restricted to be shown in media To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
... from various ailments across the world.According to some people, the government should s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95930075144 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1123198251 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179674110826 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055953104135 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572855699249 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777572584207 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532748301646 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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