Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
A glance at people's attitudes toward their daily work hours brings to light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether it is more fun to work more days each week with less hours each day or vice versa. Although some people assert that it is more joyful to work fewer days, I, as a recently employed person, believe that I would be happier to work more days a week with less hours per day.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this notion lies in the fact that it is important that a person have a stable life pattern. Recently researchers at Caltech University, department of adult behavior, conducted an experiment the result of which conspicuously divulged a link between depression and not having a stable mood throughout a week. As they contend, a negative feeling or idea will mushroom into a person's brain, just like the movie "Inception." In the long-term, no matter how happy a person is on some days, if there are some bad days, that person is at a high risk of getting depressed. If having negative feelings on some days is frequent, as the prompt suggests here --by compelling a person to work hard on some days,-- the person will try to find relief for his suffering, which is usually addiction. What they are suggesting here is that our days should be balanced. Having some good days and some really bad days may seem alright to some people; however, a person needs to have progressive steps toward happiness, so he will be grateful for his life each and every day. Thus, it is important that a person can have sustained happiness; otherwise, it will not be effective let alone fun.
Further, even if we assume that stable daily life is not important, which is not true, another subtle point that one should deem is the fact that the brain's capacity is limited. For example, it is not going to be practical to work after a certain amount of time, each day. Not having considered this fact, a person will have to spend 5-6 hours on a two-hour job. Also, in order to be able to cope with this situation, he must neglect his other essential daily activities such as sleeping, working out, shopping, and to name but a few. Consequently, he will not be as sharp as he is supposed to be and therefore this trend is going to get even worse; in some extreme cases, the person gets extremely touchy, who will get angry very readily(irascible.) Lowering his efficiency, because of inadequate sleep, a person's quality of life will be degraded, which is obviously unfortunate. Despite the fact that there are some solutions for increasing one's yield while he sleeps less, such as taking pills, or for other activities, there will be some consequences. Hence, a person cannot work more than a certain amount of hours, and forcing him will not be fruitful, not the person nor the employer.
Admittedly, some may say it is better to just work for 3 days since one will have a longer weekend and travel to some places weekly. Nonetheless, a person who has to work really hard for 3 days, also has to rest at least for 2 days, which is not fun since he will be exhausted. Also, other people that will work for 5 days have weekends and can do whatever they want.
Due to the aforementioned arguments explored in the previous statements, I personally contend that working 5 days a week is better than 3 days. Not only would it let a person have sustainable happiness in his life, but also he will be able to have regular sleep.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...re fun to work more days each week with less hours each day or vice versa. Although some p...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...re fun to work more days each week with less hours each day or vice versa. Although ...
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Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...e happier to work more days a week with less hours per day. The foremost reason why I ...
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Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e happier to work more days a week with less hours per day. The foremost reason ...
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Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brains'' or 'brain's'?
Suggestion: brains'; brain's
...at one should deem is the fact that the brains capacity is limited. For example, it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, at least, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2851.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 618.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61326860841 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66052732581 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477346278317 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 878.4 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0248885956 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.590909091 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232896476583 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909581145655 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070173689475 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171044930236 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528924127839 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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