The extinction of animal species always is the consumption of media information around the world. Then, people said that the most problem of the extinction is caused by the natural process that creates people to think about no solution according to this problem. In my opinion, I really disagree with this argument and will present the solution to this topic.
It is true that one of the most problems of extinction is caused by the natural process. Because of natural selection, some species will survive in the environment by adapting for food, breeding, and protecting self from a stranger. The more they can adapt to the environment, the more the animals can sustain in their environment. Moreover, natural disasters also play a crucial role to place some species in danger. The biggest extinction that happened more than 1000 years ago is the attack of the meteoric from the space that make all of the species in the world destroyed such as Dinosaurs and Dodos.
On the other hand, the conservation of the animal is the key to protect specific species from out of number. Of course, the extinction of the animal also relates to human activities. The ecosystem that builds the life cycles process is always in sustainable condition if there is no treatment from the outside process. Illegal activities such as hunting for specific species to take their part from their body (tusk, skin) for business, deforestation for opening space that changing the function of the land from forest to farmland can create the ecosystem out of balance. Therefore, humans should be aware to protect their environment so that the species can live longer without any disturbance.
In conclusion, even though the natural process takes a role in the extinction of animals, the other problems are also caused by human activities. Therefore, conservation is needed to minimize the species from extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
The extinction of animal species always is the consumption of media information ar...
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Line 2, column 535, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...f the meteoric from the space that make all of the species in the world destroyed such as ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05769230769 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72081217087 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503205128205 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8911742466 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318107430371 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102729161953 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365742458347 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188470919961 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396220409928 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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