You are a member of a local gym. Recently, there has been a problem in the changing area. You have reported this to the staff several times, but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter
• describe the problem in the changing area
• explain who you reported the problem to before
• suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to complaint about the issue that I am facing in the changing area. This has been reported on several occasion to your staff members, however, no action taken yet. Let me brief you about the problem.
To begin with, its being long the room has started stinking and its becoming impossible to change clothes over there. Also, the fan is not in working condition. In summers, the weather conditions makes it intolerable to change your clothes there.
Furthermore, these drawbacks has been conveyed to your management plethora of times but nothing seems to work here. Mr. Thompson from your staff informed me that maintenance will be done but everything is in vein. Now, its really getting on my nerves.
I would really appreciate, if you can come as in person and can have a look over the situation to rectify it on priority. At the same time you can keep the gym closed on weekend and fix the problem. Moreover, I want you to give feedback to your team for not entertaining request of gym members as its their responsibility to take action on time.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several occasions'.
Suggestion: several occasions
...hanging area. This has been reported on several occasion to your staff members, however, no acti...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: IN_VEIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in vain' (=unsuccessfully)?
Suggestion: in vain
...ntenance will be done but everything is in vein. Now, its really getting on my nerves. ...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...be done but everything is in vein. Now, its really getting on my nerves. I wou...
^^^
Line 10, column 298, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... entertaining request of gym members as its their responsibility to take action on ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81683168317 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57182386877 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1204455292 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395288439644 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103169958775 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768667978715 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172717500783 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12188967813 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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