People think that to be successful you need to get in a University education whereas others say it is not true discuss both side and give your opinion
In the today's age, it is necessary for each and every person to realise the value of education. Education is a must in today's age. I believe there are a lot of jobs available after University graduation but other people argue people can be achieved in your goals without education. I put both sides arguments in the following paragraph.
Analysing the statement and explain further, first and foremost education is a basic requirement to live a good life. A university degree can open the door to better employment prospects and it can get better salary. In addition, there are a lot of jobs are available with a specific knowledge and skills. Secondly, people can obtain academic and practical base knowledge by university. Furthermore, people do completed their University graduation on the particular subject so they have an inevitable skills and information for specific field.
On the contrary, people can not easily success in your work in the first placed life because of competition has increased. But it is wrong people can not get a higher salary without education. The strong example, Mukesh Ambani is the chairman of Reliance industry and he is very different people to other person because he was not interested in study but he is a more likely in a business. Therefore, he did leave the study after 5th standard. However, he is a billionaire person and the richest person in the world.
In final words, my opinion on par with that I believe education can be changed person mind as well as makes future goals come true. After, other people makes a success in your life without get a qualification because they have make a different strategy and put all effort in your life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...erested in study but he is a more likely in a business. Therefore, he did leave t...
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...rue. After, other people makes a success in your life without get a qualification...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, on the contrary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86805555556 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7621435025 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5802062294 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226627885097 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666342313908 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552438332044 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140917746567 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515299025973 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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