The two maps illustrate the public park that was constructed in 1920 and the changes that took place in it in the present scenario.
Overall, It is found that GRANGE PARK underwent many developmental changes during the span of the century. Fountain like the new establishments of water feature,children,s play area, cafe. fountain is taken and a big Rose garden is present in its center with seating arrangements. Giant Amphitheatre is constructed by removing a small stage for musicians.
Initially, In 1920, There are two entrances for the park. Northern one is called "ARNOLD AVENUE" and southern gate is known as 'ELDON STREET". Immediately after entrance, on the south east part there are Glasshouse and seats, They are removed and replaced by an amazing water feature. Along with this, Small pond for water plants is located in the north-east direction . It is now enlarged and extended to form Children's play area. In addition, Rose garden which is situated between northern entrance and pond and south-western one is relocated on to the fountain area, to the center of the park with adequate seating facilities on all directions of it. However,North-eastern area is changed into a cafe. Along with this, Among the other two Rose gardens which are located on the north-west and southwest sides;One besides Eldon street is removed . Stage which is present for musicians is renovated into a spacious Amphi -theatre for concerts. On the whole, seating arrangements which are dispersed throughout the park are allocated to the center of the park itself. Nevertheless, Entrances remained unchanged throughout the years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, nevertheless, so, in addition, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31538461538 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15583081104 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0384868305 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.375 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.081484415576 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306814862785 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511465073524 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783192463925 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05052158961 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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