Tpo 16 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group
led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People travel to relieve their stress and anxiety in this hectic world and get away from hustle and bustle of daily life. A controversial question, which is often raised in this regard is that whether people more benefit from traveling alone or with a tour guide. While some people are inclined towards solitary traveling, others, on the other hand, prefer to travel in a group led by a tour guide. As far as I am concerned, I am of the opinion that the advantages of traveling by tour are immense and indisputable. In the following paragraph, I will delve into some reasons and examples justifying my point of view.
The first noteworthy reason coming to my mind is that traveling with a tour is not only safe but also more convenient and comfortable. When traveling to other cities or countries, there is a great chance of confronting troublesome situations and dangers that put your life at risk such as confronting homeless people or criminals who may threaten your life. However, traveling by tour substantially decreases such problems as the most important part of their responsibility is ensuring safety. Moreover, the convenience of traveling by tour is an undeniable fact. A tour guide can make all your travel arrangements like booking flights, hotel, and restaurants reservation. Therefore, you do not need to worry about such things. In contrast, in traveling alone all of these arrangements should be done by yourself.
Another exquisite point to be mentioned is that this way assists you to gain a wide range of information about locations you visit where some of which are not mentioned in any websites or books. Tour guides are specially trained about their career, besides, over time, they acquire many first-hand experiences and knowledge that they can share with passengers. In addition, they can make a meticulous plan to benefit your journey the most. They usually prioritize places to visit according to their importance and are well-known. Consequently, you can enjoy visiting famous historical buildings and picturesque sceneries during your trip. While traveling alone, you may squander a lot of your valuable time visiting unimportant places.
To summarize, from what has been discussed above, it is crystal clear that the advantages of traveling with tour far outweigh traveling privately. The first merit is it provides travelers with safety and convenience. Moreover, they can benefit from a broad scope of knowledge and using their time efficiently by visiting significant places.
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- TPO 33 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When teachers assign projects on which students must work together the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1769041769 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91201750326 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552825552826 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4646482142 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249777790216 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724915860804 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337793823413 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146503255307 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280329215804 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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