The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton in 1990 compared to 2005.
Overall, the resort witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being the replacement of plants and individual houses for modern constructions.
In 1990, the seaside resort consisted mostly of trees and individual houses with a hospital in the north east, a school was to the left of the hospital, and a railway station. In the north west of the resort, there was a big house which was in front of a lake.
Over the next fifteen years, many houses were relocated to make way for a supermarket and buildings in the north west. In fact, most of the trees in the north east were cut down and replaced by a factory. In close proximity to the school, an airport was bulit. In the south of the railway station, a ferry was constructed, situated on the main road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
... cut down and replaced by a factory. In close proximity to the school, an airport was bulit. In...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty to the school, an airport was bulit. In the south of the railway station, a fer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, in fact, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66242038217 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62863703207 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7353287041 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142828733482 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064065334899 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871160079018 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110252978081 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102015547456 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.