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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work in a larger company than a small one.

Hitherto, the question of whether working in a large company will have more benefits compared to small businesses has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While working in a large company is a good opportunity to build a successful career, I strongly advocate that having jobs in small businesses might be ideal for employees.
To begin with, working in large companies means that there are plenty of workers who will all be competitors. It implies that to survive in this environment, employees need to work hard every day so that they have to endure much stress, which might affect many things in employees' life. For example, when people are under too much stress at workplaces, they tend to have less energy when coming home. They get tired of doing anything to help the family, which affects the relationship in the family.
On the other hand, working in a small company could give out many benefits to employees. In small companies, there are limited people in a company, so that there will not be many competitors, which can reduce the amount of stress compared to large businesses. Moreover, due to limited staff, it creates a family environment when working here so that employees will work more efficiently. In small companies, people can try many different disciplines, which will be just one job in large businesses. With job rotation in small companies, workers can increase the variety in work to prevent employees from getting bored when doing the same task every day.
All things considered, working in large businesses can bring humans many benefits; however, the drawbacks are plenty too. Working in small businesses helps humans have a comfortable working environment and prevents people from having stress when working in large companies.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Hitherto, the question of whether working in a large company will have mo...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...yees. To begin with, working in large companies means that there are plenty of workers ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...tly. In small companies, people can try many different disciplines, which will be just one job...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07191780822 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67166092461 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510273972603 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6166832882 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174568044926 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770174203882 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449436801054 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117718162863 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294710007647 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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