Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work in a larger company than a small one.
Hitherto, the question of whether working in a large company will have more benefits compared to small businesses has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While working in a large company is a good opportunity to build a successful career, I strongly advocate that having jobs in small businesses might be ideal for employees.
To begin with, the larger companies are in size, the stronger interior competitions are. It implies that to survive in this environment, employees need to be diligent every day so that they have to endure much stress, which might affect many things in employees' life. For example, when people are under too much stress at workplaces, they tend to have less energy when coming home. They get tired of doing anything to help the family, which affects the family relationship. On the other hand, working in a small company could give out many benefits to employees. In small companies, there is only a handful of staff in a company, so that there will not be many competitors, which can reduce the amount of stress compared to large businesses.
Moreover, due to the limitation in business size, a small- scale company is a part and parcel of cottage industry with a naturally flexible working environment. The reason is that in small companies, people can take over many distinct disciplines, which will never occur in large businesses. With job rotation in small companies, workers can increase the variety in working to prevent employees from getting bored when doing the same task every day. Besides that, in small businesses, employees can express their ideas easily. With this catch, workers can feel like their ideas are considered elaborately and favored by others; therefore, they can develop their confidence.
All things considered, working in large businesses can bring humans many benefits; however, the drawbacks are plenty. Working in small businesses helps humans have a comfortable working environment and prevents people from stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Hitherto, the question of whether working in a large company will have mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16718266254 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71269625451 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8210664206 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18579454832 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748085316465 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538188431455 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120438559125 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187824237264 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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