THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CHANGES THAT TOOK PLACE IN THE TOWN AT THE SEASIDE RESORT OF BEACH BETWEEN 1950 AND 1990.
Given are the three maps delineating the transformations of Laguna Beach during a phase of 40 years, commencing from 1950.
Perceptibly, the region experienced drastic modifications with the elimination of the old facilities to upgrade Laguna Beach to become more modern and suit the needs of tourists coming here.
In the 1950s, there were sand dunes in the west while its opposite side was occupied by the track and woodland. Between these two areas, there were beach huts located behind the seafront area which was still surrounded by sea sand.
After the next 20 years, the sand dunes and the beach remained intact, and the track was widened to become a major road while the woodland was cut down to make way for the Caravan Park. Strikingly, the original beach huts were expanded and upgraded to the villas.
However, in 1990 Laguna Beach had significant changes except for the road. On the western part, the sand dunes were superseded by the Landscaped Garden. Furthermore, the area on the east side next to the road was demolished and supplanted by the new car park. In addition, the villas in the center were developed into the hotel and right next to its east side, the appearance of the pool was reported. The most prominent of the alterations was the construction of the surf school on the seashore.
- Technology has made it easier for people to communicate with each other Some people prefer to talk over the phone While others prefer to text messages Which type of communication do you prefer and why 66
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives Do you agree or disagree 83
- The map below show the changes that took place in the town at the seaside resort of Laguna beach between 1950 and 1990 56
- The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the three maps delineating the transfor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, still, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84444444444 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6134542678 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.477427106 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986398473124 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406135470746 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498531758485 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059669631101 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316048348181 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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