Given are the three maps delineating the scene of the seaside resort of Laguna beach in a 40-year period, commencing from 1950.
Perceptibly, the town changed from a wide island in the first year to a luxury resort for tourists after the phase of development
In 1950, in the top left-hand corner of the map, there were just sand dunes whose size was far smaller 20 years later. However, in 1990, myriad trees were planted, making up the Landscaped Gardens.
In the center of the map in 1950, there were some beach huts which were upgraded to villas in 1970 before the hotel and its nearby swimming pool occupied this area for the next 20 years. The most prominent of modifications in 1990 was the newly-added surf school in front of the sea which was deserted in the previous years.
To the right of the beach huts, the track was widened to the road in 1970 and kept until 1990. Furthermore, the location of woodland was taken by the caravan park in 1970. Subsequently, in 1990, this park was redesigned to build the car park.
- Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines to test the safety of other products Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer while others are in favor of them be 78
- In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight How far do you agree with either of these views 76
- Task 2 Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Schools are the only place to receive true education Do you agree or disagree 89
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the three maps delineating the scene of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57837837838 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40946514377 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9542990375 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200118816744 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793789839898 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622350329011 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111635331787 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522234700007 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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