The given picture depicts a hot balloon and how it is operated by air and firelight.
Overall, a hot balloon consists of 3 main parts: the envelope, the burner, and a basket. During the operation period, the balloon utilises a self-sealing system with the collaboration of internal and external air.
At the first glance, from the top to the bottom, a hot balloon has an envelope containing a parachute valve, gores, panels, skirt and ropes that connect the burner parts. Finally, there is a basket for people, commodities or gadgets.
Accordingly, the parachute valve, a top part that takes responsibility for operating a self-sealing flap that allows hot air from the burner to escape at a controlled rate. At the same time, a burner with a propane cylinder provides a temperature to a particular extent that mix propane with air to produce flame to make the hot air. The hot air is an essential energy that inflates the balloon and helps it to fly.
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- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 89
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
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- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon from egg to adult fish 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, first
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82317073171 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86008110899 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8029230437 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151650758705 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829907439047 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073363423499 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121974468424 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681359490753 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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