The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provided information about the top ranking ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
It is clear that, the ten country have two criteria from electricity how to used for production and consumption. There is the highest use of electricity from china country used production is 5,398 billion kwh and consumption is 5,322 billion kwh. In contrary, korea Rep. is the lowest ranking country where used production is 485.1 billion kwh and consumption is 449.5 billion kwh of electricity in 2014. Even, the equal used production and consumption to Russia from 1,057 billion kwh to 1,038 billion kwh thus equation letarilly colse from each other. Significantly India and United States has used production rather than consumption and between there production is 4,099 billion kwh from United States and 871 billion kwh from India. On the other hand, the consumption of electricity from Germany has more use than production and there consumption rate is 582.5 billion kwh. And, the canda, France and Brazil has the production and consumption of electricity similar from each others.
Overall, the most uses production and consumption country is China and oppositely, the lowest ranking or uses production and consumption country is korea. After that, the country has the production more than consumption is Germany and the equally have both of this production and consumption is Russia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 3.97073170732 705% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33628318584 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85546027451 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411504424779 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4621741842 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246088626087 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141065175892 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116000760533 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271628264059 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139056128174 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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