Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Agree disagree?
Legal punishment continues to be controversial, as we are aiming for a society of modernity and equality. Some people believe that imprisonment is the most essential because it keeps dangerous individual isolated. However, I personally disagree with the statement, and I will explain why.
First of all, detention sometimes does more harm than good. For example, when kept in jail, individuals tend to be influenced by other inmates, thus learn toxic mindset from them. This results in which former criminals are likely to commit more crime after being released. Furthermore, while not all crime are severe and repetitive, such as first-time pickpocket, either educational or economic punishment appears to be the better option. For instance, social service participation let troublemakers understand how they can contribute to the community and even receive wages in turn. Meanwhile, fine increase government budget, which helpfully supports urban infrastructure improvement.
Finally, while imprisonment have some unexpected effects which I have mentioned, it emerges as a terrible selection to punish juvenile delinquents as well as people with psychiatric disorders. Being detained, these people can become victims of violence and sexual abuse, since there is usually little supervision for in-room relationship in jail. Besides, rebellious behaviours in teenagers mostly stem from social media reflection and poorly self-awareness. So, instead of arresting them, we should use a more educational method.
Of course, this is not to say that prison is unnecessary, because some evils are unforgivable so they deserve lifetime imprisonment, or even worse, execution. However, I strongly believe that many detentions can be altered by better punishments, as long as they are beneficial for not only individuals but also society.
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| 2021-07-28 | jonhkienvietnam | 84 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, of course, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75084175084 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12999139405 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673400673401 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.909902372 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270457619962 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923356089032 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149158996632 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208269819893 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.292349662526 0.056905535591 514% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.