More and more people are moving from the countryside to live in cities. What problems can this cause? How can these problems be solved?
Nowadays, the problem that more and more people are moving from the countryside to live in cities is increasing. This problem lead to the overcrowding in the cities and gradually become a trend of rural people. So why is this problem happening?
First, let’s talk about the most common and important cause, that is searching for job opportunities with higher salaries. Most people in countryside believe that if they have a chance of working in the crowded place like cities, their salaries will be much better. Cities are home to many diverse profession and are suitable environments for the development of science and technology. Besides, people in rural areas think that cities have higher level of living standards than where they live, such as better education and medical services. For this reason, rural people prefer to move to live in cities.
To solve this problem, first of all, the government should focus on improving the quality of education as well as healthcare services by equip more modern technical equipment, train many good teachers and medical staff. Moreover, they should provide rural people with public leisure equipment, safe transportation networks to encourage people to stay in the countryside. Last but not least, the government should help people in rural areas get satisfied and stable jobs with suitable salaries, therefore, they needn’t think about moving to cities to search for new jobs.
In conclusion, to solve this situation is really not easy because it involves a lot of ideological problems. We can just solve the problem slowly, gradually urbanizing the countryside to help people have a better life in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18959107807 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70169444212 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0248949249 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359148362045 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133537411075 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126631289197 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237279670956 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130746374157 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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