Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. It is right to exclude males and females from certain professions because of their gender?
In most parts of the world, there consistently have distinguished about kinds of work for males and females. In modern society, nevertheless, both genders have greater freedom and equality in terms of choice employment that they wish. Some people might say that it is not necessary. But, in my opinion, it should be encouraged.
There are a range of elements affect to choice job of each person such as family, friends, or character personality... One of the elements that are different about gender. According to researchers in the US, women tend to choose professions related to education, medicine,… because it request ingenuity, meticulousness, and communication. About men, who have strength should be labor work such as coal, ore mining or electricity.
However, in the vast of majority cases, making careers more open to both gender has distinct positives. Men and women should have equivalent perspectives and approaches to a job. For instance, women police officer may have greater understanding of domestic violence and having better strategies to deal with this issue. Similarly, men teachers have better knowledge and experience of the need of young boys and can easily teach them properly.
In conclusion, men and women should be freedom of choice occupations and equality. because of the benefits for the development of the country and society.
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- Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses It is right to exclude males or females from certain profession because of their gender 61
- Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses It is right to exclude males and females from certain professions because of their gender 56
- The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010 100
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , …
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Message: Did you mean 'requests'?
Suggestion: requests
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Message: Did you mean 'labored'?
Suggestion: labored
... About men, who have strength should be labor work such as coal, ore mining or electr...
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Message: Did you mean ''?
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...dom of choice occupations and equality. because of the benefits for the development of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36111111111 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04001378507 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634259259259 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5527776693 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217300799478 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675454185039 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444287745503 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122276761377 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307867321995 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.