In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that governments should adopt a maximum wage law legislation on high earners, while others claimed that people should have the freedom to earn as much as they can. Although there are arguments on both sides, I strongly agree with the second opinion.
On the one hand, the main reason why it is believed that a maximum wage limit should be adopted is that it will reduce the pay gap between the highest and lowest earners. By decreasing income inequality, it will benefit in terms of society as a whole. Moreover, several companies can save thousands of dollars by reducing employees' salaries and invest in other important aspects, such as infrastructures. Last but not least, many studies showed that the narrower the income gap becomes, the lower the poverty and crime rates are.
Nevertheless, in my point of view, there are more convincing arguments for not adopting such a law as the country will suffer. First and foremost, setting a limit on earnings will encourage skilled workers to go abroad for a better opportunity. This brain drain of the top employees will result in extreme damage to the economy. Furthermore, with the loss of excellent workers, the company will face a crisis of finance and it can take several years to find a suitable replacement. Besides, it is almost impossible for an economy to thrive when all good workers choose to work in another country where they can be offered extraordinary high pay packages they deserve.
In conclusion, despite the arguments for maximum wage legislation, I believe governments should not adopt the law in any case.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lower the poverty and crime rates are. Nevertheless, in my point of view, there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97014925373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73350375365 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9507590126 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193280873199 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606237643664 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438984136634 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112853482877 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388189299871 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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