It is no doubt that the majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. Although the way any individual defines their happiness is mainly due to their personal needs and pleasure, there are several common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing and achieving happiness.
Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. The nature of happiness of people is almost impossible to differentiate due to the fact that nobody can fully understand or experience another person’s feeling, we therefore have our own particular passions from which we take pleasure. Some people derive a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success, whereas, for others, happiness simply exists in having a good time with family and friends. I, for example, shall glow with happiness simply by talking to strangers, which other youngsters find odd and unusual.
Although it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, most people would agree that there are some basic preconditions to achieving it. Firstly, it is hard for people to find pleasure in life if they do not have a safe place to live and enough food to eat. Our basic survival needs must surely be met before we can lead a pleasant life. Secondly, the greatest joy in life is usually found in sharing experiences with family and friends, and it is rare to find a person who is content to live and be happy in complete isolation. Career, money, and success are surely not very wonderful unless we are able to share them with our loved ones. Finally, other key factors could be individual freedom and a sense of purpose in life. Obviously, a person without a passion or motivation can not attain happiness but fill him or herself with just uncertainty and confusion.
In conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it is particular to each individual, but I believe that our basic needs for shelter, food, and company need to be fulfilled before we can experience it
- Happiness is considered very important in life Why is it difficult to define What factors are important in achieving happiness 78
- Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience Discuss both views and g 67
- Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with the academic subjects at school To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- Happiness is considered very important in life Why is it difficult to define What factors are important in achieving happiness 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be fulfilled before we can experience it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 5.05154639175 356% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 937.175257732 180% => OK
No of words: 341.0 206.0 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94134897361 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72584076177 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 290.88556701 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0278035457 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 4.34317383033 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19938716042 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754583971943 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404870832773 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130340927892 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155705654475 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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