Some tourists may damage touristic sites. Explain some of the negative effects may be. Suggest some solutions to this problem?
it is true that tourist destinations have been severely impacted because of the activities of visitors. While it may trigger many adverse influences on tourist places, some effective measures should be taken to diminish this issue.
tourists might have a detrimental effect on tourist attractions. The main limitation of that activities is the fact that a large number of individuals flocking to tourist sites may strongly burden on insufficient infrastructures of numerous breathtaking places. Not to mention that a large quantity of garbage, plastic, and rubbish littered by visitors can destroy and pollute the beauty of impressive places which should be protected and carefully conserved. As a result, the beauty of surroundings is badly damaged and worsened.
However, there are various workable steps that each government and individual could take to tackle this problem. In terms of authorities, more funds and money should be allocated to restore and reconstruct tourist sites in order to maintain their status quo with a view to attracting more people visiting as well as maximizing the profits stemming from the tourism industry. In addition, each individual must be highly aware of the paramount importance of these spectacular destinations by being early taught and educated at schools and families so as not to damage that places. Therefore, schools have to provide students with useful lessons about how to preserve tourist attractions properly to make sure that their pupils can get a good grasp of protecting these splendid sites.
In conclusion, the problem may result in a serious impact on the state of tourist destinations, but every citizen together with national and local authorities could implement a wide range of measures to address this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is true that tourist destinations have ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tourists
...uld be taken to diminish this issue. tourists might have a detrimental effect on tour...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ion of that activities is the fact that a large number of individuals flocking to tourist sites m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41007194245 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9361156861 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622302158273 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6274019664 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.727272727 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315509931436 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107742249185 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867630761066 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187292494435 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672457890975 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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