Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everyone gives different views about aspects of the environment. A large number of people realize that the environment has more anxieties than a damaged ecosystem. My opinion is completely opposite of the above thought.
On one hand, a group of people say that the disappearance of species of plants and animals is not the most essential problem of the environment. There are plenty of difficult environments which must be solved. As follow, one of the phenomena of global concern is climate change. Not only the temperature is increasing day by day, but also natural disasters are more and more severe. This significantly harms the global economy. For example, Japan is the country with the leading economy in the world lost trillions of dollars and more than 1000 deaths by these disasters in 2019. Moreover, because of the impact of greenhouse and global warming, the phenomena of melting ice at the two poles of the earth happens more and more. This problem obstructs sea traffic and several nations face year-round drought.
On the other hand, the extinction of species in the ecosystem is a serious environmental problem for some of the following reasons. Firstly, the destruction state unbalances the ecosystem as well as vegetation. By illegal hunting, more and more creature species become extinct and many of them have a great impact on human life. Nobody can live if there are not any existed creatures on the earth. Secondly, the loss of some creature species is the cause of many other environmental problems even including the problem mentioned above, climate change. It is understandable that all difficulties of the environment interact with each other.
In conclusion, I agree that the most essential environmental status is the disappearance of species of creatures on the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...views about aspects of the environment. A large number of people realize that the environment has...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: As follows
...cult environments which must be solved. As follow, one of the phenomena of global concern...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... is a serious environmental problem for some of the following reasons. Firstly, the destruc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14675767918 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91654550735 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.244866538 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309348704117 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801582931424 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935948488172 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161361869567 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492283025466 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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