Some believe that politicians are the most influential people in the world, while others believe scientists are the most influential. Which side do you agree with and why? Provide specific reasoning for your answer.
Some people assert that social development depends on scientists’ inventions, which in turn powers their impacts on every single individual; however, I assert that the reverse is true when by far the most ultimate politicians possess the country's operation in their palms.
First of all, politicians wield a wide scale of influence on citizens’ lives. It is reported that there are no legal constraints on humans so as to consecutively update scientific facts or discoveries. Nevertheless, should there be a new law coming into effect, it will certainly be spread out through citizens under the government’s craving. In other words, every single person in a nation, regardless of social class, must update through TV shows and articles and follow the new announcement. For example, recently, the Vietnamese government, by any platforms, has enacted an isolation rule that people have to stay at home to abate Covid-19 hospitalization.
Under governmental control, people will be financially charged for their commissions no matter whether they are well-informed or not.
Secondly, politicians deliberately utilize their bully pulpits to assert their power. Unlike scientists who have to go through strict judgment if ever they want to announce their new research, politicians can make presentations and declarations
that directly hit people’s consciousness. To this end, a myriad of demagogues take advantage of their positions and people’s belief to get their deviant ideology across people, which leads to rebellion against the government at many places. For instance, Joshua Wong, a young politician of Hong Kong, created most of the uprisings in Hong Kong with the purpose of forcing China to give Hong Kong’s authority back to its citizens, leading to severe chaos in both China and Hong Kong. Summary, politicians are able to mentally affect the citizens
Finally, politicians are the most powerful inasmuch as they are representative of their citizens’ decisions. Annually, there is a nomination by citizens to elect the elite to, on behalf of the citizens, solve problems of their country. As a result, politicians have the right to operate people’s lives. However, there is still Democracy right among citizens to make sure that the politicians do not over interfere in their private lives.
In short, politicians outweigh power compared to scientists thanks to large scale of act, bully pulpit, and representation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, for example, for instance, in short, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48677248677 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10032142613 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60582010582 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2245062789 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.625 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140156007191 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442714776639 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032034169629 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684742077535 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028516593025 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.