University education should be restricted to the very best academic students rather than being available to a large proportion of young people To what extent do you agree or disagree

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University education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the entrance university examination, the prospective students’ application mainly selected based on their overall academic performance at high school. It is argued that higher education only provided to the youngsters who have an outstanding academic performance. As a result, only low percentage of young generation can attend university. In my opinion, I believe that it should be accessible to everyone.

The term of outstanding academic performer can lead to an injustice judgement. Genetic factor plays an important role in developing a smart person. But this factor is not enough. In fac...

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the prospective students’ application mainly selected based on their overall academic performance
the prospective students’ applications are mainly selected and based on their overall academic performance

by many factors which strongly related to how much money
by many factors which are strongly related to how much money

Its price often followed by its quality
Its price is often followed by its quality

their life a way much better if they have their university degree
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Each person give their best effort
Each person gives his best effort

for those who marked as an outstanding student
for those who are marked as an outstanding student

everyone is capable in pursuing their degree.
everyone is capable in pursuing his degree.

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