The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.
The provided graphics demonstrate the statistics registered in five distinct European nations in terms of commerce of fair trade-labeled tea and pineapples in two periods, 2010 and 2015.
A first glance at the table charts reveals that the Fairtrade of tea in all five regions underwent an increase ranging widely degrees. In addition to this, four countries witnessed an ascend during the research, apart from Germany, and Norway.
As is shown in the tea chart, it is striking to observe that Norway and Austria shared an analogous pattern with 0.2 million euros, from 1.8 - 2, and 2.8 - 3 respectively. This figure in increment was followed by that of the Netherlands, which 0,7 million euros. In Austria, the data in 2015 was 8 million, which doubled that of in 2010 with only 4 million. Likewise, the sales of France skyrocketed by 18.5 million.
Turning to the other details in the pineapple table, the commerce of Austria transcended remarkably from 16 to 48
million, exhibiting the highest figure than all given categories. This data was followed by France and Netherlands with 4.5 and 3.4 in increment. Norway and Germany, however, decreased marginally by 0.8 and 1.1 million respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, likewise, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15816326531 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88040447256 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8840517728 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181994938883 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637300548736 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767142459978 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988492687758 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08971646294 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.