In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.
What are causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem
Due to the growing population and demands, there is a tremendous growth in number of automobiles which is a matter of concern in most of the places worldwide.In this essay,we will discuss about main reasons that are responsible and some measures to overcome this difficulty.
Firstly,there are many causes ,can not define any one in particular.The main cause is an increase in population.As a part of modern urbanisation and its demands,it is not possible that an individual will have only a single vehicle.For example,if there is a family of 4-5 people and all of them are going out for studies/working/business,most of them will prefer to go by their own vehicle.
Also,some cities do not have proper rail and road infrastrcuture.In case if a country has an up to date railway system operating on a regular basis,it can be great relief for commuters.This will not only reduce pollution, but also save time and a serve as cheaper option.
People who have their private vehicles,avoid to use buses and trains for traveling.To elaborate more,buses stops at many places and few think it is a waste of time.Instead,one can reach to their respected destination much early and easily instead.
There are solutions to make traffic problems at ease.One of the major solution is the development and proper planning of a rail and bus systems. Trains and buses servicing should be done on regular basis to avoid problems like failure of breaks,tyre puncture,faulty mechanism etc.A regular time-table should be made and be followed.If there are any changes,commuters should be informed through a website or an app.This will surely attract people to use more public transport facilities and in return,reduce the traffic jam and accidents.
To conculde,I pen down saying that,It is a mutual effort from both people and the government to overcome this difficulty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48149871942 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.039142537 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 222.142857143 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8571428571 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14325278014 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618466828334 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262732350678 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633231280245 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330071954807 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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