Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, it is not uncommon to see billboards on the roads campaigning about environmental problems, such as encouraging recycle or reducing global warming. However, there is still a belief that the majority of people ignore those environmental issues. In my opinion, I disagree with this view because modern people nowadays are more aware of how they affect the environment and what are their responsibilities to prevent natural disasters.
Firstly, awareness of protecting the environment is rising rapidly. After observing many consequences of how industrialization has affected the environment like deforestation, people now comprehended how adversely they had done to the ecosystem. Hence, more organizations have been established to raise funding and introduce voluntary tasks such as cleaning the beaches, planting more trees around the city, and many more eco-friendly activities. Besides that, teachers also have delivered many lectures about protecting the environment to engage the students with many environmental activities-related like recycling water bottles or always turning off the water faucets when not using.
Secondly, preventing natural disasters is now considered more seriously. In this regard, after admitting the result of meddling with nature, humans can no longer ignore the impact that they have brought to the environment, such as more floods and hurricanes are simultaneously happening every year, and global warming is causing ice to melt in both poles. Each of these issues has driven many scientists to establish new methods of generating energy from renewable resources from the sun, wind, and tidal waves in order to replace other fuels like nuclear energy or fossil fuels.
Admittedly, developing countries' citizens are not much aware. Due to the harsh living conditions that they are having, all they have concentrated on are how to earn a living. Hence, many unethical companies take advantage of this to create more environmental issues such as releasing polluted water into rivers before contaminating. However, governments can prevent this by enacting more legislation and being strictly on the process of releasing product wastes of those organizations.
To sum up, I strongly believe that people are now more concerned about the environmental impacts than how they used to be. This is clearly shown throughout the effort of not only governments themselves, but also each of individuals as well as many other organizations, who are all truly care about the environment. More programs have been established to raise the awareness of people about environmental, and more research studies have been conducted to find solutions to minimize natural disasters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so, still, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58009708738 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15439399566 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575242718447 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1632338621 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.235294118 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2352941176 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117712703957 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397299063651 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371397540154 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749073408348 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504215383184 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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