Many governments spend millions of dollars in space exploration and research, as they feel it is an important investment; however, many citizens feel that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these opinions and include your own.
Space exploration has become more widespread since the first satellite was sent up to our orbit. This leads to a public controversy that people started to question about whether or not governments should spend lots of money into these projects. In my opinion, I firmly believe that there are more visible issues on Earth waiting to be funded rather than planets waiting to be found.
To begin with, it is undeniable that humans should learn more about the universe in which we are a part of. This may bring us to a possibility of finding an inhabitable planet for human to settle since population growth has been crunching the natural resources now. Due to this fact, scientists need to conduct more space research which require a lot of support from government, which also means that money is crucial to accomplish the task.
On the contrary, even scientists have not even got any clues about how possible they could finally reach a dream planet, but coincidentally natural disasters and pollution are awaiting to be tackled. To put it further, there are millions of people who do not have access to fresh water and food every day, but with a small amount of money that put into those space programs would save millions of lives. An illustration for this point is African people who are suffered from starvation and poor living conditions, and people would feel more pleasant and acceptable to donate and save these people than finding a planet with a mere possibility.
In conclusion, I understand that space programs somewhat play a relatively important role in our modern world, but I think it would be better if the money are spent on more pressing issues nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...y that people started to question about whether or not governments should spend lots of money ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, incidentally, may, so, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87062937063 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59500869472 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0762115326 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.3 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13048046681 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474974667829 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029281030566 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741822918421 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200794518268 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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