In the salad days of millennium the society is polarized into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that eating outside food is main factor for bad health. Different people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraph would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note.
To commence with, the first notion there are a myriad of things to be share in its favor first and foremost. Giving a health education is necessary to people as now days people eat lot of junk food so they should be aware of the ingredients they are taking in the stomach. As a result, some people have such diseases like diabetes or high cholesterol which affect in a negative way for consuming sugar and oily food. Secondly, advertisement plays a immense role in one person's life. If one is determinant to do a diet he\she may not able to follow it properly because of mouth watering advertisements.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, in this contemporary world authorities or the government can enforce such laws which limit the affordability and accessibility of junk food for instance food canteens or buffets at school should be banned to sell fast foods such as French fries along with cold drinks instead they should start selling fruits and milk products for protein to promote health education.
Having discuss the arguments and counter arguments, i would like to infer that health education is the best solution to overcome of junk food and poor diets. To justify my state of mind there is an instance of Karnataka government they have increase tax of beverages and fast food to encourage people for health education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...abetes or high cholesterol which affect in a negative way for consuming sugar and oily food. Seco...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ily food. Secondly, advertisement plays a immense role in one persons life. If on...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95323741007 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65576053582 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.855971294 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.181818182 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196008446346 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064556722367 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539900004595 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115959230842 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029714925379 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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